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Khepri

  • Welcome Mat Re: Join me...in the Land of the Scarabs

    So...I am a pretty new member of YWS - I joined on September 15 this year. name is...Khepri, obviously. (not my real name) To clear up any future confusion on ...

    Oct 9, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Out of Love

    I like this poem...the sadness behind it is touching. Some constructive criticism, though, is you might want to cut down on your use of "you". You repeat it very frequently ...

    Oct 9, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: This is my song

    Hey thanks so much! This is my first post...and you're my first comment EvER! So thanks for reading:)

    Oct 9, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: This is my song

    This is my song of today. of wild-eyed dreams made half-asleep of early morning hours giggling over best friend secrets not caring, not thinking to be crazy is to be ...

    Oct 9, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: O shaped smiles.

    Watch out because here comes my review! "yes my love oh we are magicians; bumbleberry kisses, serious musicians (whistling on through upper class commissions), close my eyes and cast a ...

    Sep 16, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Peeling Dreams (edit)

    Wow no one left anything out in their reviews :) There's not much left to say that hasn't been said, but one thing I'll mention is when you say; "stumbling ...

    Sep 16, 2010


If I were a girl in a book, this would all be so easy.
— Jo March