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Re: Join me...in the Land of the Scarabs
So...I am a pretty new member of YWS - I joined on September 15 this year. name is...Khepri, obviously. (not my real name) To clear up any future confusion on ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Out of Love
I like this poem...the sadness behind it is touching. Some constructive criticism, though, is you might want to cut down on your use of "you". You repeat it very frequently ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: This is my song
Hey thanks so much! This is my first post...and you're my first comment EvER! So thanks for reading:)
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: This is my song
This is my song of today. of wild-eyed dreams made half-asleep of early morning hours giggling over best friend secrets not caring, not thinking to be crazy is to be ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: O shaped smiles.
Watch out because here comes my review! "yes my love oh we are magicians; bumbleberry kisses, serious musicians (whistling on through upper class commissions), close my eyes and cast a ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Peeling Dreams (edit)
Wow no one left anything out in their reviews :) There's not much left to say that hasn't been said, but one thing I'll mention is when you say; "stumbling ...
Sep 16, 2010
