Kevzta

It appears to be very cliche to start of with but i couldn't figure any other way to start it, open for any suggestions though. Please read on, i have ...

Well, firstly, its way too short to give a full and proper review and there isn't much going on about from the last line. I'll never forget my eightth birthday, ...

Killing off characters year baby, especially the ones you come to love and hate.

I have written chapter one and two before but recently i have sort of killed them, and decided to start from scratch, the prolouge still stands though. Hope you enjoy. ...

THEM Chapter Two – One problem after another A trail of blood followed Tom back to the small, circular, clearing. Endless beads of sweat dripped down his dirty, blonde, hair. ...

Thanks very much agian all, and Anna, if you hadn't been so picky i would have missed loads of silly grammer areas, so thanks.

THEM Chapter One – Wrong turn The bird plummeted to its death. “Nice shot. Nearly blew its bloody wing off!” praised Mark. “Thanks.” replied Tom, handing the air rifle to ...

Hooked from the start, and the info dump didn't even bother me that much. pm when chap ones up.

Thanks everyone , i really appreciate the comments and will start editing as soon as this sentance ends.

THEM edited version Prologue- Dark Intentions Frederic Brice lingered in the shadows, watching the boy at a distance. The boy was just standing there, still as a statue. The night ...

Usually i go for a walk and loads of things spring to mind about what i could write about. But recently i have been having some dreams that would make ...