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  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: She Felt Cold

    Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad that the writing style I took up for this was effective. It was something I wanted to try out. Writing about ...

    Jul 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Proudly Psychopathic

    Thank you!! I fixed the sentence (though some sentences are abrupt to give the writing some diversity so I don't have a ton of long sentences). So glad you enjoyed ...

    Jul 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Proudly Psychopathic

    Thank you so much for reviewing, Laura! It truly means a lot to me that you enjoyed reading

    Jul 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Proudly Psychopathic

    I'm so glad that you decided to review after all because you gave me some very insightful pointers and told me what I needed to fix! I made revisions to ...

    Jul 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Whole 8 1/2 Yards

    I loved reading this! It leaves plenty to the imagination and I enjoyed the narrator. It's short, funny, to a point, and lets the reader fill in blanks. The story ...

    Jul 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Proudly Psychopathic

    Thank you immensely for the review! Your words are very kind and constructive, as well as great appreciated. I intended for the ending to be a bit unexpected, as you ...

    Jul 30, 2013


Some people are hourglass shaped, some people are apple shaped, some people are pear shaped, some people are even bean pole shaped, but if we’re not careful we all become banana shaped. This is your gentle posture reminder.
— Ranger