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Re: The Chasers - Chapter 2
Another excellent chapter. I love to read detective novels. I think that genre is one of the hardest to write because you need to know enough about the law to ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Chasers - Prologue
Wow! That was intense, from start to finish.What a great, great way to start your novel. I am really looking forward to reading the next chapter after this review! Even ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Speechless
Hello GriffinClaw! Wow, this was so good and I can't believe you ended it where it did-- effective in making me want more, but my jaw did hang open in ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: Melting Diamonds
Wow, Deanie! Wow. This was absolutely eye opening. You foreshadowed in the beginning, built up suspense in the middle, and then ended with a message you had so perfectly hinted ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: Ambition
I really enjoyed reading this poem! I loved the rhyme scheme and the way you built up to the conclusion. It was like a little story with the lesson of ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: The Day That It All Began
Hey there and welcome to YWS! After reading this, I know why your friends liked this story; it was so well thought out and put together! You really have a ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: Scared!
I really enjoyed how you set this poem up. It's different and puts emphasis on the words that rhyme. The use of the language in here has made it a ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: Death's Welcoming Arms
Hey, Defying! I'm sorry I wasn't able to review sooner but I tried to get on as fast as I could. I'm sorry that you felt the way you described ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Montague's Last
Let me start off by saying you have a real knack for writing! This story flowed and the action was vivid. And I absolutely loved that ending too! I was ...
Nov 27, 2013 -
Re: The Happy Home
This an interesting story in the making for sure! The introduction couldn't have been more effective. You're writing flows wonderfully and it's easy to read and digest. Great job on ...
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: A Fateful Find
Hey Catbug! Let me start off by saying this story was wonderfully written. It honestly felt like something I would read out of a legit novel-- I can totally see ...
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: The Description of a King
This poem is adorable. For you to think so highly of your dog and make a well-written poem about him is what gives this a unique quality. I want to ...
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: Would you like to know how you died?
I just love this story. The ending is beautifully sweet and sad, the idea wonderfully written. It was executed extremely well. The length of it was just enough to tell ...
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: Alpha-Bet
Hey there, FireFox! You're doing such an amazing job reviewing that I thought you deserved another review on your story here. I'll try my best to give you some pointers ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: I am here
Hello, Sage! Wow, you have some amazing talent. Right off the bat the reader knows you know exactly what you're writing about because you write it with confidence. You really ...
Nov 24, 2013
