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Okay, so I read it and just tried to add in the punctuation. The story is really stiff feeling. You said, "Class, today we have the honor to say that ...

I liked the starkness of your poem, however I really wanted you to prove what you were saying. Good poetry should fill the reader with a picture of the hopelessness, ...

I love this book, it is charming, witty, and manages to teach a lesson on the nature of mankind all at the same time. *warning spoilers ahead* I love the ...

The problem was that it isn't very poetic. There is no rhythm, and the word pictures seem to be cliche and overused. As Wozzell said, I can't really figure out ...

I really liked the imagery you used in your story. I particularly liked the part about the sea being a symphony it provided a beautiful picture of ocean sounds. It ...

You have great rhythm and literary insight, but I agree with some of the other people who have commented- I want more! :-) You have such a good thread of ...

I think he is an extremely perceptive writer, and I believe that saying his books are racist is very near sighted. At that time the n word was not really ...

I have only read the first one, and I must said that I did like the concept, it was fun and fresh; however the writing was not really good or ...

Well just a few things I noticed... proud- didn't you mean prod? So I guess the harshest criticism I can give you is that it sounded a lot like Twilight, ...

Your problem is that you don't sound very persuasive. You keep repeating yourself. I think an easy way to correct this would be to change your structure so that you ...

I honestly enjoyed this piece very much. You might have been able to end it on a more climatic note, however the table had a very distinct personality- I love ...

I thought this chapter did a lot for character development, and (I don't know if you meant to do this or not) it really felt like Griffin was picking out ...

I LOVED the play on the stereotype. I loved how you put it in the view of the stepmother, and pretty much everything. There was only one sentence that stuck ...

I LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE this book! Probably one of the most amazing books of all time! Atticus is awesome, Scout is a perfect character. For me the bes

Once again I like where this story is headed. We got to see a different, more sleepy, side of Sam, and I liked how you ended it with Griffin. Okay ...