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Kepe

  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Ink Heart & Ink Spell by Cornelia Funke

    Err; I have to say that I really disliked Inkheart. Which is weird because I am not a picky reader, and I have liked some of her other books. I ...

    Sep 13, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Wuthering Heights

    I love this book! I think Heathcliff is one of the best villains in literature, and Catherine is just so awful! The story is kinda like watching a string of ...

    Sep 12, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: idate Freddie- an icarly musical

    This is hard to review. The characters are not your own, neither is the basic story line, so what else can I review? Grammar, which is unimportant in a script? ...

    May 14, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Host

    Personally, I liked these characters better. The souls are kind of 'perfect', but they are not human and so it is easier to excuse there perfection, and they are slightly ...

    May 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Best Friends

    So question: Did you just make up a form of haiku? If you did, that seems a bit silly to me, as it rather defeats the whole point of a ...

    May 5, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: short story: skinny dip

    This is going to be a weird review, just to warn you. The flow and dialogue were fine. No real problem there. Where I had a problem was in the ...

    May 4, 2008
  • Script » General, General Re: Crossing the Rubicon

    Wow, I think this is going really well so far. It is kind of intriguing because I really have no idea what will come in the next scene. I thought ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Hey Its High School Pt2!

    In general, your flow was good. It was easy to see the individual personalitys of each character. The only thing I really had a problem with was the last part ...

    Apr 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Soup Kitchen

    This is a good poem, it had heart. Just to comment a little on the style of the poem, at the beginning of the poem you let the lines hang ...

    Apr 27, 2008
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Tantalizing Cellphone

    I liked it, especially the fact that you made the cell phone have a voice without saying anything. Also I think just about everyone can relate here. Personally, it reminded ...

    Apr 18, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Rin

    I do like your story, especially near the end. I do have few little bones to pick, so please bear with me. "Smooch! Alexius kissed me." Okay I just thought ...

    Apr 15, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Modern Penelope of Odysseus part 1

    You seriously had some really good moments in there, but then your flow would get broken by an awkward phrase of some sort like, "The neighbor’s curious pet ran into ...

    Mar 25, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Envy and Adoration

    Okay, so I really liked the last few sentences- that was when I really got into the story. mikedb1492 has a point, though. I think your story would be a ...

    Mar 15, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Watership Down

    I have never seen the movie, however I vividly remember the book from 6Th grade. I actually loved it, and I don't really know why. I guess, you just get ...

    Mar 8, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: A Wrinkle In Time

    This is just one of those book you can't help but remember, and it explained the string theory better than any of my textbooks so far. I think I found ...

    Mar 8, 2008


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