Keowyn

ah. i see.

where did you get yaks from?

this was really good. It grabbed my attetion, and as it's a rough draft there are some grammatical errors. I found two things that you need to work on. 1: ...

1.) Harry Potter by J.K. Rowlings. I t was horrible! 2.) Black Stallion by whoever, i though it was just stupid. 3.) Alice in Wonderland by i don't care. hate ...

well, i prefer grey instead of gray. it just looks. . . better, I guess. More formal. Grey is english, gray is american. *grumblesaboutdifferentspellingthatisdrivingmeNUTS!*

proably not. it was a school assignment to write a first chapter of a book. I MIGHT come back to it after my other story is finishedf

thanks, and the no particular order is as in lines- not words. the world would be a catastrophe if we talked like this: pizza it tastes with icky butter to ...

i don't know why words on lines are so entertaining as they march march across the paper in no particualr order or why my old, chewed on yellow pencil could ...

i'll have the rest this afternoon.

Kathrynne loved the sensation of wind flying in her hair. It tugged at her wet, stringy brown hair and flung it into cat green eyes. From her perch in the ...

i use two packets of pens a day most times, and it's annoying i admit because i'm left handed and it smudges all the ink .

well i have to say i use a pen alot at school, because i have two study halls and nothing to do!

hey, thanks! yes i was very tired, an as soon as possibly i'm going to redo those errors. i'm looking forward to writing this one.

*hi everyone! i decided to do that write a novel in a year thing and this is the beginning of it. not much here though, as it's not complete. wan't ...

thanks, i am new to typing and just finished the shcool calss so they are indeed typing typos. thanks again!