Keowyn

how did it repel you? :cry: well, God be with you. if you were trying to hang on to Christianity. . . i can only advise you to find a ...

:) thanks for that. I did realize I should have capitalized and all, so I'll go edit it and see if you like it.

The dark embrace cold wrapped around a heart of stone Burrowing into the depths of a troubled soul A black forest mingled with loss mingled with fear A rugged cross ...

yeah, I never was the girl in my class who wrote the same 'roses are red' stuff. no, not really, I'm not 98. I'm 16.

I wrote this when I was in fourth grade. I'm not too proud of it, just wanted to know what you think of it. I wake up Trees surround Light ...

The Bible Lord of the Rings by Tolkein Artemis Fowl books (the codes at the bottom are cool) by Eoin Colfer Chronicles of Narnia by C.S. Lewis Protecters of the ...

that one's an 8.

you guys are WRONG. The Bible is a ver nice book, and not because I'm a Christian. Because God wrote it, and it's HIs word.

:-k hmm. . . this should help, it's a link to a site I check on every so often. and again :-K oh yeah! a tip is add a bit ...

yeah, fencing looks cool. I'd like to try it. like the avatar! Welcome to the site.

i do believe in ghosts, or beings like them, because I have three freaky stories. My cousin was at are grandmother's house one day, a month after our grandfather died. ...

This really cracks me up. I was about five or six and I wrote a 'book' and a 'sequel.' It's hard to read now but yeah. The first was about ...

rate the middle one, please. my little sister said she was scared of Darth Frodo, but meant Darth Vader, and I thought it was cute for a four year old.

6/10

I liked this. I didn't see anything, and it flows really well. The stanzas aren't too long or short, and it has RYTHYM. I liked the idea it portrays: To ...