Kelsi222

Hi. This was an okay poem. My advise to you would be to make it longer. You did describe a lot of normal girls and wanting to be loved in ...

WOW!! This was very good I thought. It was very well explained out. And I absoultly love the fact that you ended with a cliffhanger. A very good cliffhanger at ...

Hey. I thought this was really good. You realated to a lot of teens with this poem which is great!! You did an awesome job of describing what the girl ...

To TickledPink: I don't mean to come off as rude but what you said to lakegirls: Maybe writing isn`t your thing, this wasn`t intertaining at all, get some experiance and ...

Hey!! I really enjoyed this poem!! I agree with the grammar stuff. Anyways I think the others were a bit harsh. Madhatter, you could of finished the poem before you ...

Hey Nicole!! It's Kelsey!! Lol. Well first off I'd like to say what in the name of cheesemuffins do these people know how to start YOUR BOOK. They are like ...