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Kelsi222

  • General Articles Re: Public Speech: School Shootings, Part II

    Hey. This is my whole completed speech. Top to bottom. I hope you enjoy it!! Please review. It was ran trough spell check this time!!! "Massacre at Columbine", "Terror at ...

    Jan 30, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Public Speech: School Shootings

    Thanks scotty.knows. I am sorry about the spelling and grammar, I forgot to run through spell check. And thanks for agreeing with the "Good Morning", I will lose marks for ...

    Jan 29, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Public Speech: School Shootings

    Thanks, you did have some helpful tip, but most of it I already know. And with the whole point thing. THERE DOES NOT HAVE TO BE A POINT. You no ...

    Jan 29, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: DO NOT RED

    Hey!! I really enjoyed this poem!! I agree with the grammar stuff. Anyways I think the others were a bit harsh. Madhatter, you could of finished the poem before you ...

    Jan 29, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Public Speech: School Shootings

    Hey, I just like to answers some of the questions and clear a few things up. 1) At the moment there really isn't a point to the speech, our school's ...

    Jan 28, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Public Speech: School Shootings

    Okay I'm not trying to sound rude or un-apprichated but if you read my top message when i first posted to speech you will see that it said THE SPEECH ...

    Jan 28, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Public Speech: School Shootings

    Hey!! Your avdise from the both of you is really great!! Sorry about not running it through spell check, I'll remeber for next time! First off it's not a perssauive ...

    Jan 27, 2008
  • General Articles Re: Public Speech: School Shootings

    Hey, this is my half finished speech for school. It's not done yet, but I thought I'd post it to see what you guys think!!!! =) I worked really hard ...

    Jan 27, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Lake Girls

    Hey Nicole!! It's Kelsey!! Lol. Well first off I'd like to say what in the name of cheesemuffins do these people know how to start YOUR BOOK. They are like ...

    Jan 17, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Romance/ Drama

    Thanks! This is just a rough draft that should of never been posted to begin with. The better copy will be better!! And the think with Chole and Charlies names ...

    Jan 14, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Romance/ Drama

    I apoloigize for sounding appreactive. I didn't mean to sound that say. But I thought it was pretty noticable that it wasnt finished and I cuond not post the entry ...

    Jan 14, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Romance/ Drama

    First off the stroy is not even done yet. There will be a lot more drama then that little bit. And about the song, I said in the story the ...

    Jan 14, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Romance/ Drama

    July 19th 2007. A young woman named Charlie Windsor sat in the first row at the church. She wore a beautiful, elegant pink strapless dress that fell just below her ...

    Jan 13, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Help

    Hey guys! Thanks for that good advise from the both of you!! I really apprechited it!

    Jan 5, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Help

    Hey there. I'm looking for some help to start off a book well a short story that I am writing, I have most of it planned out but its the ...

    Jan 4, 2008


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