Kelsi222

Hey! I thought this was very well done. It was almost refreshing. I almost never hear stories like this any more. So it was nice to hear one again. I ...

Hey! Thanks for that.^^. Your the only one besides my friend to say that. So it means something different coming from a stranger. Thanks, Kelsi =)

Hey!! I really enjoyed this poem! It had amazing imagery in it! And you did a really great job in describing everything! I love the ending line. You did a ...

Hey! I was a little disappointed in this chapter. You didn't introduce the cutting in a very good way, actual you didn't introduce it at all. It was un-called for. ...

Hey!! I thought this was really good!! I hate to admitt it, but I love stories when students get with the hot teachers!! Lol Well a really great start to ...

Hi. This was an okay poem. My advise to you would be to make it longer. You did describe a lot of normal girls and wanting to be loved in ...

Thanks, I think it is a lot better from my first draft also.

Hey again people!! This is the edited version of my speech. Please READ AND REVIEW!!!!! Thanks!!!! Kelsi =) "Massacre at Columbine", "Terror at Tech". Good morning teachers and fellow students. ...

WOW!! This was very good I thought. It was very well explained out. And I absoultly love the fact that you ended with a cliffhanger. A very good cliffhanger at ...

Hey! This was a good start, though I didnt get much out of it. I'm sure the next will be better!! But it was a great start!!!! Kelsi =)

Hey. I thought this was really good. You realated to a lot of teens with this poem which is great!! You did an awesome job of describing what the girl ...

Hey!! I'm not a very big Harry Potter fan, but this made me a slight bite interseted!!! It was well written out and had good grammer and spelling!!! I enjoyed ...

Hey. This story was based on a dream I had. It's about a girl (who was me in the dream) who's adoptive mother dies (Kate and still killed by Ari), ...

To TickledPink: I don't mean to come off as rude but what you said to lakegirls: Maybe writing isn`t your thing, this wasn`t intertaining at all, get some experiance and ...

Hey. Thank-you so much for the great editing! It sounds a lot better now and you did a awesome job at it!! Thanks!!!! Kelsi =)