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Re: The Warrior Princess
Hey!! I really enjoyed your poem. I thought as a girl, it was very impowering, if that makes any sence, espiaclly with the line "And I will be no man's ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Weak
Hey! First off, I liked how you began every line with "you". I thought it gave the readers a sence of how much you disliked the person. And I dont ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Talking to Chris
Hey! This was amazing! It started out peacful and happy, which hooked me right away, but then it goes into a more dramtic setting, which was an awesome way to ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Just Pretend I Didn't Tear Your World Apart
OMG, this was fantastic!!!!!!! Lol, sorry I get excited when I read awesome poem's like yours!! Well this wasen't much of a review, but more so a complament!! So keep ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Forgotten (my first poem posted here)
Hey!! I really liked your poem a lot! It was a good topic to talk about, espically since it's what a lot of teens go through in their teenage lives! ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Smile
Hey!! I thought this was so, so perfect!! I wasent to to mushy, but it still had that litlle bit. I espically adored this line:[/quote] You kill me with that ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Death Penalty.
I rather the chair. It's quicker. But I have heard on CNN that they gave you leath injections. And where I live, in Newfoundland we uset to hang people way ...
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: Death Penalty.
Hi there. This is a topic I've always been a bit iffy on. I am for the death penalty. But I live in Canada, so our country does not practice ...
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: CSI fanfiction
Hey!! I LOVE CSI, but I almost never see stories about Greg!! So I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work!!! Kelsi =)
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: I'm not seducing you but...
Hey!! I thought this was a pretty good poem. I'm not a potery person, so I can't really say much. Lol, well keep up the great work! I really enjoyed ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Public Speech: School Shootings, Part II
Hey!! Thanks for the great reviews!!!!! This is yet again another revised versison. SO PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!!!!!! Thanks!!! Enjoy =) Public Speech- School Violence "Massacre At Columbine", "Terror a
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: NCIS- Two Mom's (Re-named)
Hey!! This is the second copy of my story. Once again it's based on a dream I had. Very different from the show and it's no where near finished. Basically ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: Escape
Hey! I am offical in love with this!! Lol. You are doing such an exellent job with it! Keep it up!! Kelsi =)
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Escape [Prologue...I think]
This was exellent. I defently would make people and myself want to read more!! Can't wait to read the rest! Kelsi =)
Feb 5, 2008 -
Re: Watching You
Hey! Well this piece was very enjoyable!! I was very cute and I'd like that it was about an older couple! Can't wait to read more!! Kelsi =)
Feb 5, 2008
