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Re: Finding You, part 3
Hey everyone, here is part 3! Enjoy and please review!!! Thanks! Sam woke up early that next morning and hopped into a hot shower. He did not sleep much the ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Love Poem
Oh how I love love poems!! This was short, but like said above, no matter how short it is still a poem! And this was very creative, you worded it ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Loneliness is like sex
This poem was amazing! I loved your comparsion of sex and loneliness. Very different but very true! Your first stanza was perfect! I opened up your opem to tell your ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Finding You, part 2
Thank you so much! It means a lot!
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Finding You, part 2
Hey, here is part 2! Please read and then tell me what you think!! Thanks! “So she just took off?” questioned Mr. Molloy, Max and Sam’s father. “Yeah, with Colby ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Finding You
Thank you both for the great reviews!!! I will edit this very soon!! Thanks :)
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Finding You
This is just something I came up with a few hours ago! Not that great now, but it will be better! So have a read and tell me what you ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Him :)
This was a good poem. But I have a couple things I'd like to point out: 1) This is a big pet peeve of mine, people not capitalizing their "I". ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: It Brings me to Tears
This was an amazing poem! I loved it. It was short, but it had a lot of emotions. No concerne on my part for it! You do a really good ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Child Dies in Hot Car, Should Mother be Charged?
She should be charged. She left her CHILD in a car for 8 HOURS! How could a fit mother FORGET her own child, for that amount of time.
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: History
Okay guys, this is a letter i wrote for history class. Its an assignment I have to do, but it is also this contest thing also. So any help will ...
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: Lake Girls, Chapter Two.
Hi, I really liked your story. I found it very interesting and highly amusing. My favorite character is Brooke. I loved when she couldn't get the bra undone. That was ...
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: The Story of My Life
Thank you!
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: First Kiss
Hey, I really liked this. It was very sweet. And it had a great concept to it!! Keep up the good work!!
May 18, 2008 -
Re: The Story of My Life
Hey. Well here is chapter two! Hope you like!! I woke up the next morning with the sunlight of a new day streaming into my face through the light purple ...
May 18, 2008
