Kelly-Vision

Haha :D Thank You ^^ But I'm over the guy and all now :P I Wrote that a little while ago, we are still friends though which is good :wink: ...

Well, this was something I wrote when I got aggravated by someone. It doesn't rhyme:P. I haven't decided weather to call it Love Is Pain or I Beg To Differ, ...

I quite liked it :wink: It was very original and... I suppose the word is mesmerizing

Ok this is part 2, but it is NOT a direct continuation from the last one. It's a bit further on in the story. You'll pick up on what's been ...

howw old are Kirun and Ezra Here? In your story they're 8 haha. Fantastic, now I have a face to the name :D Theyre quite handsome fellows *winks* haha. You ...

FINISH IT! PLEASE POST MORE! I BEG OF YOU! Haha... I have to say, that was one of the most interesting stories I've read in ages! I can now call ...

I Loved It. Loved It Loved It Loved It. Honestly, i can't see anything wrong with it at all! I really hope you continue it, it's a side of the ...

I really enjoyed it ^^ Just watcht your structure and when people are saying things make sure you space them out so its not like "blah" "blah" You know?:P Apart ...

I Really Liked This ^^ Structure is fantastic. Vocab. is brill. Nothing Bad To Say At All!^^ x

Thank You, I have noted your comments and I will consider your options. I do have a twist for this story, its not going to be your average love story, ...

Where Do I Begin! 1-Rob Pattinson XD 2-Justin Timberlake 3- Heath Ledger R.I.P 4-Declan Donnelly 5-Kellan Lutz 6-Taylor Lautner 7-Johnny Depp 8-Hugh Grant 9-Cam Gigandet And Loads More XD xXx

[ I Am Currently Editing And Re-Drafting This Whole Thing; It Will Take Me a While To Give You Another Sample Of It But Bare With Me And I Hope ...

I Enjoyed It. It Was Short sweet and straight to the point. I may be wrong on this but i keptfeeling like you ere switching tenses a lot. Like going ...

I Really Enjoyed This. I found it quite believable and it really makes you want to read on ( would say page turner, but that isn't very literall haha) be ...