Kelly-Vision

This was really effective. It showed exactly how bad some people's lives can be, and how they view it. I would really like to read the rest of this story!

Wow this was so deep.. I really loved this. It was so personal and I feel the readers can relate to it and empathise with it. It shows the inner ...

Hey There =D Thanks For Commenting:D It's Nice To Get To Know You Two Too :D "Peace out club scout!" I Like It ;) XD xXx

Very...Philosophical :P I couldn't stop laughing at "Love me tenderly, when I like it rough." XD This just cracked me up. I LOVE the impact that leaving "together" on it's ...

I liked it :D Didn't quite understand it but I didn't have to to appreciate it :D Only one thing to say, at the start of the poem the sentances ...

Nico - White Cat I awoke from my slumber of god knows how long. Whoever last hit me with a tranquilier sure used a heavy one. I was in the ...

XD XD XD I cant stop laughing XD That was absolutley hilarious!Chinkie...Brilliant XD And Makin Her Be Tan and Blonde Is Brilliant XD Having Her Hate Her Parents Is Brilliant ...

I absolutely loved it, I'm a big fan of twilight and I thought that was better- it should be in one of the scary movies XD I LOVED IT! I ...

Well...Where to begin... Kelly's the name! I'm 14 From IRELAND BABY (NO-Leprechauns ARE NOT Real)...Eh... I have an AWFUL habit of capitlizing the first letter of everyword that i type ...

You've done it again :lol: Bravo:P Loved it, as I loved the first chapter. I love the way you describe the culture of the elves; it is a very original ...

Sorry, I'm Confused XD Whats the leaving? Is that basically when the partials leave? Why would some partials be for the Duke? Could someone PM me and fill me in?:P

Not a review, just my opinion=D I liked it :D it was a very original take on things; a different persepctive. Love the rhyming scheme, dont know what it's called ...

Name: Nico Doddins Age: 16 DNA shared with:White Cat Gender:Female Appearance: Eyes: Hair: Clothing Style: White Everything-White Hoodies(Emo Style Hoodies) White Skinny Legs, White Tees(All with funk

Thank You (Y) Much Appreciated :D

Haha Thank You :D I actually wrote that a while ago, and fortunatly I'm over the guy and all now! Thankfully though, we still remaine friends to this day, though ...