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Re: un named story. preface and chapter 1-surfaces.
HEY GUYS, I would love some feedback. Sorry if the paragraphs and formatting is weird; my computer is a little crazy right now! Preface; Even the smell of this room ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: They often say, never bring a peacock feather inside.
Hey guys, I was bored and just thought ok this quickly.... So its not very thorough. Can you guys maybe just see if it captures your attention- do you think ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Yet to be named story: Chapter one.
Hey thanks so much for your help :) Yeah India is quite a common name, I think its really pretty! Thanks again. I will get to work!
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: HEY everyone.
Hi Guys, I'm new to YWS and its all very exciting. Love reading but more so writing, cant wait to review some of your works whilst getting feedback on mine. ...
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: test
hey i really love this so far! make sure you keep going with it:) xxxx
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: Yet to be named story: Chapter one.
Chapter One; Surfaces Awakening to the same dust streaked sky was a tedious normality. The sun’s rays always marbled the air in an identical way. I had known this land ...
Jan 25, 2010
