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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: A Boy In the Sand.

    ...scrambled backwards but tripped and fell back into the sand. The second 'back' in that sentence should probably be replaced with something different. Because of the 'backwards' beforehand, it makes

    Feb 18, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Through Hazel Eyes Chapter 1 PT. 1

    ...carving my hands on shards of glass... I like this comparison very much, but I think it needs more. Carving what into your hands? Shapes? Lines? I've got to figure ...

    Feb 17, 2009


Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured.
— Mark Twain