Kazdrea

Phew! I was worried I would be too late! I joined here quite recently, and let me just say that this is a wonderfully supportive den of talent! My long-term ...

Chapter 2 - Fields of Towers Leonar lived on a farm outlying the city of Trankus. It was one of many farms which provided food and goods to the walled ...

I can understand your tears; it suggests sincerity on your part. This is important when you are using emotion so much as you don't want your readers to feel deceived ...

Thanks for the perusal and critique, not to mention the compliments (I'm very sensitive ;))! bigbadbear - Thanks for reminding me to italicize foreign speech; I had not encountered such ...

KAZDREA: DAWN OF THE DRAGONS' SECRET Chapter 1 - The Dragons' Decision The sun sank slowly in the west as Valhalla Geode entered the mouth of the dragon's cave. The ...

Hello again! I'm glad you took my advice and named the land after the African word for Freedom. Good job providing a detailed image of your fantasy world as well; ...

This looks like quite the original story! The cultural statements are intriguing (moving from a tyranny in reality to a tyranny in fantasy) and bold, and you've already created a ...

CREATION MYTHOS OF THE WORLD OF KAZDREA In the beginning, there was the One God, Odnasept. From nothingness It created power, and from that forged the Sun, the World, and ...

Thank you to everyone who has responded thusfar! My name is T. Pesando, which hopefully will be the name on the book when it gets published! The title of the ...

Hello to everyone! I'm a Canadian from Toronto, Ontario, who's been writing since the age of 13.... ...which brings me to the name of the post. Ever since I was ...