Kaywiia

This was incredible. I was entranced from the first sentence. It is a truly beautiful peace of art, and rarely do I describe stories as art. Only a genius could ...

Good, very good actually. Your first sentence doesn't make sense though. Otherwise I love the feel of it. Post the rest of the chapter, I will be sure to read ...

I like it, though as mentioned above I do suggest developing characters. While reading it i was under the impression 'Elizabeth' was a guy. I didn't know until i read ...

This is a really amazing piece, it makes so much sense and is beautifuly written. Keep up the good work!

I really want to know what happens. Good job with this. I love the dramatic feel.

Yes, there will be more future installments of this, I intend to post about seven, for they are part of a much longer book.