Kaylyn

Here goes: Capitilize your I's and the beginning of your sentances. Mind that you spell things correctly and review your post for any mistakes(like hitting the wrong key typing.) Other ...

I edited it using the critique that I had off the original. Can anyone please give me some advice, or show me something I left out? I would really like ...

Wow, I know your position alot of my friends have had to quit gymnastics lately because of their injuries. What level did you get to in gymnastics before you got ...

First off, I was a little confused at who was speaking in the dialogue. Could you specify? Another is why would some strange random guy be led in my a ...

I have to say that your story sounds like the real everyday life of high school. I like it and think has a great plot. Need to work on the ...

Chapter One I woke up screaming, again. Sweat covered my whole body, and I kicked most of my body free of the heavy comforters. My heart was racing faster than ...

Now my father was dead, his blood stained body lying just feet away and this was all I had left to hang on to. The thing that had just taken ...

I really love your story, and I hope to see more of it. I think that the paper crown at such a big event is a nice touch. I also ...

I really like the whole story line, I think you need to introduce the characters better, and check your spelling but other than that I can't wait to see what ...

how do you delete stories? My updated version of the story, Half-Blood, is taking its place, its the same exact story.