Kaylyn

I've read all of Cornelia Funke's books... and own them. I LOVE the Ink trilogy. She needs to come out with the third one already!!! *jumps up and down impatiently* ...

When you post alot, it is harder for everyone to critique. If you break it down into sections readers are more likely to read and review and catch more mistakes. ...

When you post alot, it is harder for everyone to critique. If you break it down into sections readers are more likely to read and review and catch more mistakes. ...

Thanks, I'll do that!

Thanks for the critique, I have edited it and hopefully added some more suspense and urgency to it. Oh and to Sureal, I never said that loads of people would ...

Thanks for all the critiques. ~ Prologue ~ Venders shouted their wares and bargains as Caolyn walked through the market, her golden hair glinting against the bright sunlight. She used ...

Okay, THIS IS NOT LIKE TWILIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay I got that out of the way (I am a bit touchy about anyone comparing my book to twilight.) Unlike Bella, Alyss can't ...

Thanks, I will do that, thanks for the advice.

Hey, I think its looking good. I didn't find any grammar mistakes that jumped out at me, some of your sentances might need to be rephased but thats to make ...

Wow. My best friend laughed when Piggy died. The whole class just started at her, when she bust out laughing. It was hilarious. You say Piggy today and she laughs. ...

Oh I like your story, it appears that it won something... Anyways I hope you keep going with it. Good luck.

Oh I haven't read it yet, I liked the book loads more than the movie. I have only read the first two. He talks to a God?

*sighs* I love the twilight series, they are awesome. The best books every written. Period. I agree I don't have any idea why Bella should like Jacob... Edward is just ...

Out of a scale of 1 to 10 I give it an 100!!!

I love Abarat. I have read the first two and have been eagerly awaiting his newest arrival. It is supposed to come out this fall. My favorite character is Candy. ...