Kaylyn

Tai saw the expression on Raine's face. "You had the dream again didn't you?" she asked softly. "It wasn't your fault." Raine winced. "No big deal. Have you done the ...

Hello there! Welcome to the insane asylum... I mean YWS! I see that the basics have been taken care of so... You're in advanced in Lit, as a freshman in ...

I understood the whole poem. I knew what it was about. However, it wasn't written in poetic form. More of a short story. There wasn't really a rythm or a ...

When you look out into the ocean You might think what lives below When you search through the forest You might think about what was here before When you are ...

I can see that the rules have been taken care of mostly. Welcome to the Yws family. Run while you still can! YWS can get so addictive that it bacomes ...

Howdy there! Welcome to YWS! I've always wanted to try fencing, but knowing me, I'd probably poke my eye or someone elses. :) I also love languages. I'm better at ...

Run while you still can. Before you become obsessed. :) Fantasy is the only thing I can write. I am going to try something new. Eventually. :) I also love ...

[quote]A large, rotund woman, fat rolling over her khakis, gets the bread dough, which is the color of her skin and beats it.[quote] I agree. I don't like the word ...

Okay, I'm going to critique this quite truthfully. I'll try not to rip it apart, but I make no promises. Befor last night, you were my world. But now it ...

Hahira's Twilight I listen to the train blare, As twilight darkens the day I look up and see the sky, And the star that at me gaze. I look across ...

Lucyy, I'll get yours done. Sorry about the delay. The holidays have been very busy for me. :)

I would suggest someone lock this. Look at the posting date. 2006!

Hey there. I can see that the members here have already had a debate about chatspeak. :) Anyways, I'm glad to see that you have found this site. Its awesome. ...

Welcome Holly, I love that name by the way. I am also 16. Thats interesting. I also want to become a teacher. Its a toss up between ag and english. ...

Thank you all for taking your time to post these awesome reviews. They will really help my story out. I'll get to editing it soon. To tired and my mind ...