Kaylyn

This is a drawing that I love, it one of my favorites.

~ Chapter Five ~ Raiyne led Fallyn towards the sunrise; the sky a blaze of colors. The multicolored leaves crunched under her feet, and the breeze blew softly through the ...

Yeah thats my picture up there you posted jennie. i didn't want it. *moans* i don't take good pictures! I am the blonde one next to the brunette in the ...

Its capitalized at every line because of the autocorrect, sorry I can't change it. And I am not trying to get a message out, it is just about me so ...

Thanks, I guess you're right. I'll think of something to add...

Thanks.... I edited it now. So is it any better?

Okay, time for me to rip apart *coughs* I mean review your work... I like the idea but I think that you need to have a better opening sentance. Draw ...

Yes, I have read breaking Dawn, and I loved it. The end of the book was bittersweet though. A happy ending, but the last one. Yes I have a websire ...

I can not tell you how boring it gets being Death You need a period at the end of this sentance. No one EVER just calls you to say "Hi". ...

Okay, the drawing looks great but.... (yes here it comes.) the hands need to be worked on they seem flat and very 2 dimensional. You want to round the sharper ...

Abarat by Clive Barker Tree of Avalon series Redwall series I'd say Twilight, but you've pribably already read it.... Saving Fish from Drowning Rainmaker Inkheart, Inkspell... The Thief Lord Artemis ...

I didn't see any major grammar mistakes in this poem, so good job there. I loved the poem, it flowed nicely. Good work. It had a nice rhyming scene and ...

In this story you jump around. Is Jade vistiting her dad or going to visit him for the summer or what? Its a bit confusing. I understood your spanish and ...

The rain came down hard as if it was being pulled down by an unknown force. The wind howled like a pack of wolves as it blew across the deserted ...

Okay the Salem Witch trials were siad to have started after two teenage girls ate hazardous fungi on some moldy bread. They accussed their maid of being witches. Of course ...