Kaylyn

Wow, cruel and ironically funny at the end. Right now I am short on time but I will review your chapter in detail when I get home. I found it ...

thanks for the critique, BUT ITS NOTHING LIKE TWILIGHT!! Sorry.. a bit sensitive about that...

I'll start working on it!!! And I'll let you all know when its completed!

Great Story! Sorry that I have no review for you, if you want me to do an extensive review PM me. I just couldn't bypass this story after I read ...

A young woman walked down the dark empty hallway. The wooden floor creaked under her as she took another step down. She stopped walking for a moment and stared at ...

Amazing! One of my friends also wrote on the sound of music. I liked the flow of your poem. But of course eberyone had different opinions... Keep up the poetry. ...

I love the drawing. I am partial to black and white pencil and charcoal drawings. I can not draw people very well. You did the right amont of shading in ...

I think you should work on the eyes a little. I think that they are a little to round. But I love the way you drew the hair like that. ...

I don't think I can. The attachment can only be so large. Thanks for the critique. I'll let him know whats been said!

Thanks for all the critique.

Loved your poem. so envoius. i wish i could write poetry that good-i cant.

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A hoodie does that. But anyways. Ballons are on her hand. I think I am going to writer a story based on the picture.

Oh, I love this latest chapter, I wish you would get more of Molly in though... You have as usual done a good job. I didn't see any grammar mistakes, ...

This is one of my drawings. I got the idea from a friend. I drew it in class when I was bored.