Kaylyn

I love the patterns. It really adds to trhe picture. Although I think you need to add some emotion to the girls eyes. She looks like she is staring into ...

Haha funny comic, I think that you aren't cut out for drawing though, lol. I like your books alot better. Youre a good commedian though. What are the pigs at ...

OKay, I think you do need more shading and as mantioned before it does add depth. The face in my opinion needs more than an oval shape. Her hair looks ...

Great picture-except for the people. That can be fixed just go to edit it and draw the window to where the people are out of the way. Here I'll show ...

Wow. perfectly exquisite. I don't understand how you got these perfect shots, they are just great. You should definately look into a career in photography because youre just that good. ...

Oil Pastels? I really like it. It reminds me of a scene in my favorite book. It flows very nicely. Keep up the god work!

This was a picture I drew on the bus on the way to the agriculture expo. Each leave wasa bump on the way. Well tell me what yall think. I ...

You did an excellent job until i got to the last few paragraphs. So I'll only critique your last few. Here goes: I was in and out of the house ...

I woke up and tried to stand, but something held me back. All I could do was move my head so I bent it towards my body to see where ...

Great story, I just couldn't pass it by without letting you know I enjoyed it. Later, If you want I will ghive you an in depth review. You had a ...

Thanks for all the critiques as I continue through the story.

It reminds me of a scene of Abarat

Okay, Rueben, not one of your best pieces. It was confusing and I have no idea what is going on. I can tell that it was a sudden thought, although ...

~ Chapter Four ~ On the Run Later that night I awoke in panic from a nightmare. As I tried to remember the dream, it became more distant than before ...

You are horrible... you left me on the edge. WHy? You need tocomewith the follow up. Other than the factthat you left me hanging, the story was a nice happily ...