Kaylyn

Oh I drew it in color too. Here it is.

ah, well okay then.

Oh, believe me. The roads were far from smooth. Each leaf on the tree is a bump. haha, I had the hardest time drawing everythinf else.

Sleep Comes when I shut my eyes I go to a place where I might fly Where I almost never cry A place I could meet that one guy Somewhere ...

Wait I just read the latest Artemis Fowl book. Holly or Butler doesn't die. *glares accusingly* you lied.

I want to know what happens to dustfinger and meggie and Resa so bAD. I wonder whats going to happen between the ttwo. I think that Inkdeath had already been ...

OMG!!! I lovede this series. I first saw it in a book store but then saw it in a public library. I then snatched them from the shelves and read ...

Hmmm, sounds intersting. I'll have to read it. Have you read the historian? It is a good fantasy book too.

This was one of the greatest vampire book I have ever read. It is about Dracula and a line and generatins of historians that look and search for Dracula. Its ...

It was the last battle; blood sprayed everywhere like an angry waterfall. I could taste its metallic tang on my lips, I could feel its warm and sticky liquid as ...

Yeah, I read it in 7th grade. I liked it pretty well.

Well, since you have gotten so many congrats I won't parrot it. So what was it about? I keep hoping that UI can finish something that can be published...

Interesting title. The story was a bit dull, maybe if you didn't sound so repetitive... Anyways this could be an interesting story but it needs some polishing up. Hopefully though ...

So.... yeah.... just wondering.... anyone there thats wants to critique it?

Great job, it looks great. I am so jealous, you didia really great job with this. I love how you got the water drouplets in there. Its so... I need ...