Kaylyn

Welcome to YWS. So your 16 too? Thats cool, so am I. I mostly do Fantasy Fiction and poetry so well probably end up criticing each others work. So if ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! So youre from South Africa huh? thats interesting. So what weather are yall having? I just want to let you know that I would be ...

Welcome to YWS I hope you feel comfortable among here and if you have any question feel free to PM me.

You did her hair and face great. Your shading is very good. the only piece of advice I can give you is put some wrinkles on her shirt sleeve. (I ...

um 6/10 yes what does hiro mean?

Ai, can anyone move this. I acidentally clicked on the wrong one. Could someone put this in Other Poetry?

Who says there is a next part? wahahaha... *cough* i have been thinkinn about extending the story though.

You live and die You learn to cry Never know whats Around the bend Never know what could cause an untimely end Possibilities are endless Left to us to explore ...

Thanks for the crit:)

So far, nothing peculiar had happened, which in itself was, well, peculiar. This was the exact thought that Xylon was having the morning that the strangest thing that had ever ...

I tried to read iy, but it started out way to boring for me.

so what kind of writing? short story or novel or novella?

Thanks Cheshire Cat, I really appriciate the critique. :)

I read forests of the Night and all the other books. I loved it. Thanks Dr. Tick Tick. And I have read the Historian. So thanks for that recommedation. I ...

Amazing talent. I could never had done that. great job!!