Kaylyn

You live and die You learn to cry, Never know whats Around the bend, Never know what could cause an untimely end. Possibilities are endless, Left to us to explore, ...

hehe, snickers at Misinterpreted's mistake. Again though really that is a really good poem

Thanks for the critiques everyone. They really help. By the way Livinginfantasy I love your siggy.

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Thunder clapped and lightning bellowed. This was the night of the council of Elders. loved the opening sentance. You did this very well. "A storm is brewing in the east, ...

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Yes great flow. It is quite a different writing style. But I like it. You'll definately get an A. Good luck, great job, and keep writing!

Love you avie. 10/10. Major Twilight fan. Can u tell?

thanks, I know what you mean. Its a bit too broad. I need to focus more on one subject.

Thanks, which other one? Oh that one. yeah... Agian thanks bunches. Its nice to hear such positive feedback.:)

lol. I loved your poem. know i willl be obsesses with finding a rhyme with purple now... anyway great flow and i thought it was a very clever poem. i ...

Great job and other than the grammar mistakes you did great. you copied myers style hreat. I think that this could even be a section added in to the book. ...

You did very well. This story was very descriptive - unfortunately for when I was reading about the electric chair. It was a bit scary and sick... but if thats ...

I think that you started out the story very well with the storm. You let the reader know about the character such as shes a girl, tall, shy, and has ...

Welcome to YWS! (Sorry i dont mean to parrot) Please dont worry, we give honest reviews around here. Escpecially me. I'll tell you what I thik about your stories. And ...