Kaylyn

Ewww, whats that? JK jennie. 7/10.

Thanks, I'll edit it. I see your meaning. As for cliffhangers...well, i love to write them but I hate to read them. lol. AS for came to...its a term I ...

I promise she's 10. She is about to turn 11 though. :)

WoW! lol. This was great. Although I did spot a mistake. Your grammar was off a bit. Its planned not planed. Other than that it had a great flow to ...

PLease review.

I didn't see anything dark and emo about it, I loved it. I think that raw emotion is the best. It makes me feel what the writer feels. I will ...

Again, I liked the storyline. You could go far with this story and I believe that it has some major potential. All it needs is a bit of polishing up. ...

Well whats been said I think has been covered. I for one loved your work. It was fantastic. I really hope you continue with this because you have me sitting ...

This introduction is great. Its detailed, and it lets you inside the characters head. I loved it. Your grammar and punctuation is great, I couldn't find any mistakes. This story ...

Great story. Its was amazing. Its a great prologue and I really hope - and want you to continue. I agree. It could use some details. I didn't see any ...

Awesome paragraph, please keep writing it. It was a bit of well... how can i explain it? You had me so built up over the characters and that the darkness ...

Thanks for the positive feedback. It would probably make more sense if you read all of it. The posts are all short like this.

Yes, this is my love angst poem. Mind though, it is the only one. I thought that I'd post it for the fun of it. :) From the very start ...

lol. great ending. that was nice.

lol. that was a great poem. when the cheese attacked. so original. you can garuntee that there will never be another poem like it. i need your friend to sputter ...