Kaylyn

Twilight is better. Thats just a fact sorry. :D Harry Potter, It was a great series, don't get me wrong, but it didn't hook me like Twiligth did. Twilight was ...

I like the idea, but it sounds a little like the Giver. Have you ever read it? Its really good. Just stay away from that. Great idea by the way, ...

Okay at 15 days the baby's heart begins to beat. I don't approve of abortion, it is the killing of an individual who has absolutely no choice in the matter. ...

Not racism, and yes when you are interviewing for a job, they tell you what your job consists of. Me, I work at the YMCA gymnastics, and everynoe has to ...

OMG! That was hilarious. Everyone was looking at me like I was crazy. *sniffs* you just HAD to make fun of Bella. You could so make a career out of ...

Welcome to YWS! Yes, I know that this line has been used a hundred and one times! :) This is the place if you want to improve your writing skills. ...

Welcome to YWS! I can't wait to see your works. Its a pleasure to have you as an addition. So there is a basic rules here. Have at least two ...

Courtney, slow down on the smilies! :) So many.... Thanks for letting me know how you feel about it... *sniffle* JK

*edited* Demeter: Those lines mean that I am smart enough to know that you don't mean it. But thanks, sometimes when I read it I don't catch those things. Thanks! ...

Okay Lovabale Little Sock, you were overly harsh. I think that you need to stop being so pessimistic. The girl that wrote this asked for help, you don't have to ...

So ya'll finally posted something up for the sophmores. haha. You let the FRESHMANS get something up before you. :)

For our annual exibition, we need a catchy slogan. The theme is comics that have been made into movies. Ex. Up, up and away. Up and beyond. Please help! Thanks.

Okay, I'm not sure that I have read the second chapter, but I'll go ahead and give this a shot. “Leah, your mom is dead worried about you” I said. ...

Wow, long post. You really need to post this in sections. Shorter ones. The length will depress anyone who tries to read it. Thsi could have been made into two ...

Alright then. Let me start. Please don't take my critique to harshly, I just mean to help out your writing. First off, you need to cut down on the amount ...