Kaylyn

I think that this could be a great story. It just seems a little cliche at this beginning. Make it your own, blow the other writers out of the water. ...

Thanks you Galerius. Someone agrees with me. If you are going to be president of the United States, then you should have more than two years of experience. HE'S GOING ...

Okay, you have GOT to have good grammar and punctuation. Take some time to edit it. So, here goes my critique. As the sun comes up i look around for ...

Great poem. I haven't seen one this good in a while. Its nice to see something different. Personally, I like rhyming poetry, and I found this fantastic. Your grammar was ...

Thanks for all the positive crits! I dont get those very much in poetry. :) What? Galerius, you didn't tear my work apart at all this time.... ITs like there ...

Oh, okay, I get the name now. I always wondered... THanks for explaining. Thats neat.

I can't wait, I get Evernight today!

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I'm new at poetry, anit can be annoying I know that it can be annoying to read. They are all in the poetry section. But...I couldn't resist. This isn't my ...

So could you. :) 3/10.

Wait, where did I have though in the poem?

*Slaps myfreindsavamp* Haha, you SHOULDN'T of had that V8! :)

*Swaggers in with pencil and sword* "Who won the writing contest?" everone asks. "I did, again." *turns to oneeyedunicorn* "You need to better pick your fights." *Orders McFlurry* What?! You ...

Your banned because.... uh... I said you where. And I ban myself. Haha, so the one below me can't do it.

I do! Its Jennifer Lee. Called Jennie for short. Whats my second name? Starts with an M. Its not Kaylyn, your trying to guess my middle name.