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Kaylyn

Kaylyn

  • Other Poetry Re: Autumn

    Your's is so much better than mine. How could you say otherwise, this was great. I personally love and prefer poems that ryhme.

    Nov 10, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Preps are bad for your sole?

    This isn't a poem. Please post this somewhere else. I don't find this funny. And if you going to post something in the poetry section, make it a poem. Not ...

    Nov 10, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: *taps microphone*

    Welcome to YWS! Hehe, so I see you have already made friends on this site. As Meshugenah has said, check out the rules, and have fun. In that order. :) ...

    Nov 10, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Merry Met

    Welcome to YWS! I'm sure that you'll find this site to your taste. I can't wait to see what you put out there. So what genre do you write? Check ...

    Nov 10, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]

    Aww, so sweet. 8/10

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Stupid Questions

    lol. there are some pretty dumb people in this world.

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: (:

    Welcome to YWS! Glad to see you here. So I guess you already have the rules downpat. Great. So what genre do you write? What are your hobbies? Well, see ...

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Herasy and Treason

    This was a great story! Do you have any other posts on this? I would enjoy reading them, and it would be so good! Your grammar was flawless. I have ...

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Iriad (part 10)

    Very original story idea, I like it. I didn't see many grammar mistakes so great job in that area. You should probably put some details in the story. What did ...

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Frozen, unfrozen, and freezing again

    This was a bit of a long post. I would suggest that you break it up some. You'll scare off your readers. Great writing style. Tell your friend to get ...

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]

    Get over it Jennie. Gosh. *slaps *singerofthenight's* forehead* You should have have a V8! *giggles and runs off* I'll post a new one.

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: High School Juniors

    I don't know what I want to do yet. I do, but I can't choose. Literature teacher Ag teacher Graphic Designer Along with other jobs. I love kids and am ...

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Research Re: Old un-often used vampire legend help.. .

    He was cruel, very cruel. Have you read The Historian by Kostova? It is mainly about his history, but intermingled with the main story. It's really great. Big book though.

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Research Archives Re: Elfs

    Everyone left out pointed ears. Usually, tall, lean, green tinged skin, green pointed eyes. Beautiful people. Often called the Little People.

    Nov 8, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Remember Autumn

    Interesting storyline. I saw a few grammatical errors. For one, Bible is capitilized. You had a few others too, and I am sure that if you read back over it ...

    Nov 8, 2008


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