Kaylyn

*taunts and sticks out tongue*

*sticks out tongue* Nanananana, yes I'm happy, you pestered me so much about giving you a review. We're still not even you know.

Heres your critique, FINALLY, I got to it. Okay, first off. No !? or other double ending punctuation like this, in your case it would have been! not ? because ...

AND STOP LOOKING AT THE SPOILERS to the books you haven't read yet! Go jump someone for them instead. :) I'm preordering a ticket. nanananana Me, yes I'm twilight obsessed.

Banned because...I said so! :) And for having red letters. And I ban myself, so the person below me can't. *sticks out tongue* Go ban someone else.

This was a short poem, but then again there are a lot of those. Look at the Red Wheelbarrow. Its really short. Some are even two lines. But... I would ...

Okay, you have the basics down, but I believe that this poem could be great with some polishing up. Work on your grammar some. I noticed several words that were ...

First off before the critique: tay_star92 please turn your caps off. Okay, so here goes. The whole story was weird and confusing, and yet I love your writing style. I ...

So you write different genres? Thats neat, I for one, can only write fantasy fiction. So you just turned 18! Thats great. So are you a senoir in HS or ...

Hehe, REvenge. Here soes some pranks. Water on the corner edge of a door. When the door is pushed it comes down on ppl. Putting red coolaid in the shower ...

SUpernatural, I prefer to write that way also. If you can't seem to get any new ideas, revert to yours or even your friends or families dream. Change and tweak ...

When you get into a car crash, its horrible. You know its coming but can't do a thing about it. Alot of times, the victims shriek. Causes: Swerving to miss ...

Banned for...hvaing bad grammar in your avvie.

Its great to see that you've read over the Rules. I'm glad that you found this site and am glad to see another fellow writer. Well, if you have any ...

Is it Dania? Diania? Teddybear22.