Kaylyn

hiye there! Welcome to the asylum, I mean YWS! :) Glad to see that YWS has another addition to the family. I would love to see your works. Check out ...

She glanced behind her to make sure that the detective was following. After confirming that he was, she continued to make her way to the living room. She sat down ...

Raiyne checked the sky. She smelled a thunderstorm coming up, the faraway tell-tale signs of dark clouds loomed on the horizon. "You'll be glad for the rain, won't you?" she ...

okay, okay, take it away. Its time to start.

The sound of a dorrbell interuptted her thoughts. She stood and glanced at a mirror as she made her way to the door. Her brunette hair tumbled in soft waves ...

thats nice. Welcome to YWS! I like to write poetry and shhort storiess too. Make sure to check out the Rules. If you have any questions PM me.

It is okay to post your prologue with your first chapter. Just don't make it to long, because then you will scare your readers off. :) Its nice to see ...

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Thanks for the crit. I knew that it couldn't be perfect. :) I edited it.

Hey Alanna! Great to see you on YWS! Its always great getting to see new people. Hehe, I am often a vent object also. So check out the Rules, and ...

Welcome aboard! *waves back* I love Evanescence, she is one of the best singers ever! So, I see that Adnamarine has provided you with a link to the Rules. Read ...

Welcome to YWS! So glad that we have a new addition to the family. I can't wait to see what you come up with. So what genre do you write? ...

Thanks for all the positive crit.

Welcome to YWS! Hopefully you will find this to your taste, I know I did. Please no chat talk, and read the rules, and no one will bite, I think. ...

She sat in bed, although the clock and her mind told her that it was time to get up. Rain pattered softly against the window at a steady rythym. Today ...