Kaylyn

Did I really? :O I didn't realize. Sorry if I did.

Welcome to YWs! Your 15... so you would be a freshman right? I like your introduction, its different. :) in a good way of course. Just check out the rules, ...

Howdy Hodge. Its nice to see that you have found YWS. Its a great place to improve your writing skills. I know that it had done me a big favor. ...

Nyla let out a sigh of relief. She hadn't realized she had been holding her breath, waiting for his answer. "Thank you," she said in his ear. "First off, you're ...

I wish the best luck of finishing your book. I know that I am trying hard to finish mine. :) I hope that you'll come to find YWS as a ...

Its nice to see that you have jumped right on in to YWS. YWS users are mostly nice people. (I think that a few may bite.) :) The rules have ...

*sorry, I'll try to make it a tad easier* "How...how did you do that?" Nyla asked her parents shocked. "It wasn't us, it was you, and you know it," Gwenivere ...

*Thats okay* "Because I'm telling you. Most people today don't believe in the exsistance of faeries, so they never see them in their true forms. Humans see what they want ...

It was for a contest, a death scene contest, so, I tried to put empasis on the blood. :) Thanks for the critique though. I needed it, and appriciate the ...

"Yes that's right, and you know what. I want Paul to stay here. He was and has been the only person to help me out and actually care," said Nyla. ...

"Who are you tto decide who can hang around me? You haven't contacted me my whole life. I'm supposed to trust you? I had to find you, did you know ...

Banned for banning someone for having a bad memory.

"No thanks," replied Paul and Nyla at the same time. Nyla turned to look at Paul, this had to be confusing for him too, he didn't know these people, but ...

Its looking good, although it is a bit confusing with all the charcters introduced so quickly. I would suggest you slow it down some. Describe the ares and charcaters more. ...

Nyla looked into Paul Rose's eyes. She felt that connection again. Since it appeared that she might be finding her past soon, it wouldn't hurt to take a little detour. ...