Kaylyn

Alrighty now, first off let me say I love Princess Bride (the book) although the movie was ok. With your photo the jaw is a bit to wide I think, ...

YWS has changed alot, I've been an off and on member for about two years, I can't imagine how it looked when you were on! Welcome to YWS (again). :) ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone!

Hey there Lucinda! So I'm not the only one with a crush on Artimis Fowk? :) I love the disney movies as well! Pocohontas being among my favorites. So just ...

First of all I applaud you on Haikus, I can never get the hang of those. :) The second one seemed a bit cliche to me, like I've heard it ...

Good poem, altohugh let me suggest some changes. You could do without the ; behind every single line. You don't need that there. Also it seems as though your last ...

Hey there, I'm Kaylyn, Everyone has seemed to have covered the main rules so I'll give you some tips and information about the fabulous YWS website. Contests are hosted in ...

Howdy Sophie! Glad to see that you have joined the YWS family. Workin on a series, eh? Thats nice. Ill have to check it out sometime. Follow the rules (above) ...

Howdy there! Welcome to YWS! It's a great site that will definately improve your writing. You'll also find many online friends here. :) So, just some rules around here no ...

Hello, and welcome to the great site of YWS! :) Just some rules: So dont use chat speak such as rofl, lol, and such. Also use good grammar. It makes ...

Heya there! Welcome to YWS! No, you haven't screwed up...yet. Mwahhaha *coughs* Anyways, its great to see that you have joined the family here. So just some simple little rules ...

Hehe, Welcome to the insane asylum *cough* I mean YWS! It's great to know that your boring and enjoy writing. It seems as if *writwatiwant* covered all the rules just ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! Its a great website. So, tell us about yourself. Whats your favorite genre to read and write? We at YWS, will review your work with ...

I love the imagery you used throughout this poem. It was very interesting, however, I think that you could cut down on the use of pronouns (he, she, they, etc.) ...

Powerful poem. Powerful words. I like how you used words to convey such powerful emotions across. Your very talented. I like your last line as well as your first. However ...