Kayleigh

Sit over here, Let’s pick at the scabs, From the time our wounds wouldn’t heal. Look in my eyes, Does my hurt still remain, From the time we both realized, ...

I think I can see where I've gone wrong, thanks for the comments. Yes, I was writing from experience, and I just ended up telling an account of what happened, ...

So simple yet it's great!! Made me chuckle, hehe.

I really enjoyed this poem! It flowed nicely and nothing seemed forced. Great topic too! Haven't read a poem about smoking before, makes a very refreshing change.

This piece is very descriptive, which isn't bad, it can just be a bit flowery sometimes and cloud the point. Another point is that you compare her hair to a ...

It was the title that made me read it too, lol. I thought this was a really good piece of work. You definitely conveyed your emotions well, and you could ...

The late September evening was calm, and there was an unmistakable chill in the air. Autumn had most definitely set in. The year had gone so fast, soon enough it ...

Remember that night, You carved your anger into your chest, And darling, I hated you for it, But I hated myself more? We swore never to do it again, didn’t ...

Wow! I really enjoyed this. It flows nicely and seems effortless! Well done xx

I always hated that cold, dead doll, The one with the straight-through stare, The one who sat aloft and watched, The one who couldn't care. She knows every sharp-edged secret, ...

Hey xx I'm new here, just thought I'd be polite and say hello!! That's it really!! Hehe xx If you have any questions for me, feel free to ask! Bye ...