KaylaMason

@AngerManagment I understand that the repetition can get rather monotonous, but when I write poems, I tend to say them out loud, to hear how they sound. So when I ...

Thank you so much. Since I only have two peices on here (I'm new) you can visit for more. Thanks again

A very cute and light-hearted poem. It flows nicely, and I like how the boy's perspective is commenting on the girl's.

This may seem a little bit redundant because of the previous reviews, but frankly I have the same thing to say: it needs to flow more. The flow could be ...

concentrate on ripples never let them fade keep them growing yonder where stillness had once laid. see them getting stronger a growing entity with each new passing droplet their will ...

This is a pretty poem. The line breaking is a little awkard, but that may be intentional. For me however, the awkardness is not needed in a poem about something ...

Hi. I really like this poem. Just for the sake of reviewing, I will say that the rhythm isn't completely fluid in the last three lines, as it is the ...

lead weights falling from the sky scream to just release my burden hear how loud the voices cry how long does it take to die? how long will i shut ...

Thank you so much! I would be so happy if she would. I appreciate anyone who would take the time. Please keep spreading the word to any fellow poets you ...

Thank you so much for reading my work. I appreciate anyone who takes the time. I edited my signature as you suggested, and I hope more people will take a ...

Thanks! Yah swimming is pretty awesome. I saw that you have a snow patrol song as your signature. I

Thanks for the intro. Fav color - green Fav sport - swimming Fave type of food - Italian I'd really appreciate it if YOU would visit my blog... its kinda ...

Hi. I'm Kayla. I'm a 15 year old poet. I wan't people to read my poems. Because right now nobody does. I want people to critique my poems. Because right ...