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Re: closed for editing
I really enjoyed reading this love this. I love the way you use description and at some points i was laughing so much my ribs hurt. This chapter once again ...
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Re: closed for editing
I find the beginning of this story intresting, it reminds of "A Series of Unfortunate Events" By Lemony Snicket. I like the Narrative in this story. Is the Narrator the ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: The Leading Man's Unlucky Loot (Chapter 1)
1st May 3067 I don't like what I do. I absolutely hate it. All those innocent lives, But it's a living I guess – A bullet whizzed past Karta's head. ...
Jul 14, 2009
