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Re: Dawn (a novel, unfinished, but very close)
Okay, first off, this is a great story. I liked how the first two parts, the battle between light and dark and the birth were written in a certain style ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1- Abby's Dream
This is a really good piece. I like how you've managed to keep everything still shrouded in mystery while giving us enough information to be scared for Abby. You've given ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Supernatural Fan Fiction (so far.)
YES! SUPERNATURAL FANFIC! First off, Have a cookie for loving Supernatural *Hands you a cookie*. Second, Have a cookie for writing a good story *Another cookie* Third, Have another cookie ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Gale-A hunger Games fanfic
I have to say, at the end of Mockingjay, I hated Gale. Not only did he possibly kill Prim, but he just ups and leaves. But this has changed my ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: The Black Rose
This whole chapter has a lot of mystery and I think it is perfect. I honestly cannot find anything wrong with the grammar or spelling. Which is something to be ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Angels - Prologue
I just have to say... Wow. I mean it. This was great. It was mysterious so that we didn't know exactly what was happening but we knew enough to be ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Yo
You are my hero. Huh? If you say so... Question: Why? I mean I am awesome and all, lol jokes. Thanks for replying. xoxo -Kit
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Yo
Okay, well I stumbled across the About the Authors section (I probably should have posted here a lot sooner but eh) My name is Keiley, but everyone is more than ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Hell Fire Chapter one
Alright, so, Interesting. Another thing that stood out about the scene below me was the bodies. The blood had long since dried and now perminently stained the ground where the ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Hell Fire Chapter one
Um, I wrote this ages ago and decided that it was a waste of space just sitting in my computer files, so I spell checked it and decided to post ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Light and Shadow - Prologue and Chapter 1
I'm not very good at long detailed reviews but I'm give it my best shot. I throughly enjoyed the chapter. I adore the otherworldly-ness of the whole thing and the ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (prologue)
I quite liked this. It has a sense of mystery about it that draws people in. The first paragraph is enough to get people interested enough to want to read ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Girl in Blue
I'm not really one to point out errors, because everyone is human and everyone makes mistakes. I thought that it was a very interesting piece. I've read hundreds of stories ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Shattered Pieces: Prologue (EDITED!!!)
I loved the way you wrote this. The way you made us wait to see where they were or what was happening. It added suspense to the story. I truly ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Angel Wars Chapter 1
My review may not be as detailed as some of the others you have received but I wanted to let you know what I thought. I really enjoyed the concept ...
Oct 22, 2010
