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Re: My Aborted Child
This had me in tears at the end. It was such a powerful story and something I really agree with. You are an amazing writer.
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Spirit
This is very captivating. The line about the 'Five simple mistakes' really grabbed me and I just had to keep reading. I couldn't find any grammatical or spelling errors. Everything ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Password problems
This sounds so stupid but bear with me. Okay, so we all know about the new chatroom right? Yes? Good! I can't get into it. Why? Because I have forgotten ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Angels - Prologue
Wow, just, wow. This is amazing. It's a little disturbing. The Ebon Witch actually scares me a little! I want to know what's so odd about this baby. I just ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Trying to Define Art
It takes a writer of real skill to be able to write something so violent, short and blunt and have it still be beautiful. I really can't criticize on anything. ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: what do you listen to while writing?
Once I've plotted out my story, I make a playlist based on my main characters personality. I think it helps me get into their heads. Though it does make for ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Pen Pals
I'd love to have a penpal. I used to have one but then we fell out of contact. I miss her... I'm always happy to talk to anyone if anyone ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Where'd your username come from?
Do I even need to say where I got mine from?
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Book covers (:
First, can I say that the cover you designed is incredible. I mean absolutely mind blowing. Second I would really love it if you could design a cover for me. ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
I was looking into publishers/writing resources on a website. I started out on Cassandra Clares website, which linked me to another website. Which linked me to another website which linked ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: What are you listening to right now?
Concrete Angel by Martina McBride. It's a really beautiful song. Everyone should listen to it.
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: A Child's Fear - Chapter 1
An odd concept for a story, but a good one. Something interesting that hasn't been done before. I like how you used italics to separate the monster (?) and the ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Prologue- Iris Carter
The opening line was epic. Loved it. It really grabs attention, which is exactly what you need. I was very sad by the end of it. Poor Iris! Losing her ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Nature's Elements - Chapter One
Hi again! How are you? Good? That's good! Now onto the review! I loved how you gave reasons for why things were happening, why people were a certain way, why ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Nature's Elements - Prologue
I like the idea of your story. And the mystery of it! Most people have a problem with someone diving right in and not giving any explanation but I love ...
Jan 25, 2011
