Katlyn67

Great chapter. Interesting imagery. Great use of character development. A bit stop-start in places, but that's ok. The structure is really well organised. Nice tenses you got going on there. ...

Hey there :) I love the imagery you have used. I like the idea of your piece, it's really nice to see it a bit more to read than previous ...

Hey unmarkedterritory :) You're 18 minutes old! I'm Katlyn67. Welcome to YWS :) :) :)

I've got one. A young girl is raped. The man who did it, however, is a priest. Because he is a renowned man, people don't suspect it first. You know ...

Name: Katlyn67 Rank: Mascot Location: Western Front Bio: Graduated from the school of Blink 182

No listening No subtlety No novelty To be found here No wondering No pondering No worrying Nothing to fear "Sit up straight!" "Talk to me more!" What nonsense Everything is ...

As some of you may know, 567ajt is away for two months, therefore he himself cannot post his most recent works. We can contact each other by email, so he ...

*stunned silence* *round of applause* *standing ovation for one minute* *Two* *Three* *Four* *Standing ovation for 50 years* Wow...just wow. That was amazing. You hit the nail right on the ...

Hey Horoku! :) You have such a lovely name. Are you Asian by any chance? It's a really pretty name xD I would say post it in the General Fiction ...

Chapter 1...and a prologue too? I think they should be separate personally. I found the prologue maybe a bit too short for my liking. I would have loved to know ...

Hey there! I didn't enjoy this one as much as your last ones. I guess because it didn;t have the bang that the first chapter had. I also found the ...

This was a sweet poem! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I love how you strucutred it and it had a great flow to it, even if the second line of the ...

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I inhale deeply to cut Deeper into the bare wound But I feel nothing I can't even walk As the cut starts to heal My legs are wrecked "Please stop ...

What's the thing about? Anyway, great poem! I loved the way you expressed yoursefl throughout, it was astonishing! I also loved how you used the image of darkness throughout. Talk ...