Kathy_7_Kathy

very nice... I may not be a genious in literature, but i thouught it was really very good... An advice: explain more, we have 5 senses, use them, describe, explain... ...

NICE I liked it very very much It is very intresting... maybe you should describe more the necklace. bye

I liked it very much!!! 8) I'ts very pretty!!! :D And it is verry intresting!!! :D

Thanks very much, I will try to fix it. It was very helpful... I am a disaster writing in english, that's why I want to improve... I'm glad you're intrigued ...

NICE very preety!!! I liked it very much!!! You should add more details, but the rest is very nice bye.. :)

nice I likike it you should describe more the man in the front, but is very very nice good preety bye..:)

This was very beautiful... I liked it very much it is wonderfull !!!!!!! this is a good poem, a really good one... you sould go n writing poems, you really ...

Nice... Very nice.. I liked this very much, i realy did good luck bye

I like this very much! specially the end!! You should make it longer you should talk about them, what they do, what thwy see, what they feel, that would be ...

you do not suck!! It´s very nice But it needs to be longer I liked it very very much!!!! you should go on writing poetry, its nice!!! make it a ...

I actually think you sould make it rime, that would be a bit nicer but it is nice, I admit, The last paragraph is veryvery nice, but if there was ...

I simply loved it!!! It was wonderfull!!! and it's so true!!! it´s awesome!!! You should go on writing things like this it's amazing realy!!!! you rock man!!!!

Hi!!! well.. If you wrote a novel you should publish it, I don't think it's so hard, specially if its good well you can ask me anything whatever you need.. ...

This is my first post, I hope you like it :) The streets of Paris were terrible, the sand flying arround entered me in the eyes and I couldn’t see ...

Hi!!! I'M Kathy_7_Kathy I would love to have new friends I love books, movies, music, and so on... bye...