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Re: I love you
The love felt for you in my heart is strong And I must be strong Fro when you are gone. I look back from the reflective glass And see you ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Come back
Very, very good. I just love how this poem flows. When you say it out loud, it just sounds good. Once again you spark my curiosity. What is the story ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Bella-Preface
Preface Still with restful eyes, she rolled over onto her back. Or tried to anyway, for she rolled right into her sleeping brother. She jumped up to stand upright upon ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Invisibility
Very nicely put. I love how you chose to word what you felt. It comes out clear and understandable. Plus, I feel the rhyming just makes it that much better. ...
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: A Face by Many Names
I am very impressed by this poem. Just the title is capturing. Your word choice was very good. The only change I would make would be possibly integrating some meter ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: This is me, but mixed up!
nice pic! i especially like the shoe on the bottom. but yes, very impressive use of technology! :D
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: I'm new...
'Ello! I'm Kathrine. I'm was forced to join this place by a loyal member (wiseman210)...and it does seem interesting. I hope to figure out how it works and start writting ...
Sep 28, 2008
