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KatherineF92

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Starry Nights

    hey there dreamwriter, i liked your poem. it was quite relatable. and i didn't find it akward at all, you should have more confidence in your work. though the second ...

    Feb 15, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Shadows of Eternity - Chap. 4

    your style of writing if definatley appealing. it's not difficult, nor is it bland or immature. the story is interesting, after a few paragraphs i forgot i was supposed to ...

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Disney Doodles

    Demeter! these are great! and i love that you love disney movies as much as i do, haha. these are really good pictures. especially the one of simba :) the ...

    Dec 28, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: You and I

    ok, don't hate me. i found your poem a tad creepy. like.. i understand that your describing sex (are we allowed to say that word? oh well) in such a ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: ode to an alienated lover

    hmm. i like it. but i don't understand it, not really. maybe it's just my comprehension skills (or lack thereof), but i can't figure out what it's telling me, other ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Fire Tears

    you lost me after her bf broke up with her. was her bf cody? and if so, why did he break up with her and then chase her home? and ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Wolf

    this is a good cartoon sketch, and you have some real talent. if you're looking to get into more realistic images, just remember: nature has no outlines.

    Dec 26, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Love Story

    i thoroughly enjoyed this. not only are the faces appealing, but the colors and writing really liven up what could've been a dull sketch. nicely done, very creative

    Dec 26, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Saving a Tree Revision

    Thanks Rosie! I'll definatley keep your comments in mind while I work on this.

    May 7, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Saving a Tree Revision

    Saving a Tree Mondays. “Katlyn, time to get up.” If it weren’t for the rays of sunlight grazing my cheek, I would have rolled over and gone back to sleep. ...

    May 5, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Down in the Valley

    Budding in sunlight an orchid so small, A flower of most radiant fragrance. The beauty and essence one could recall; The enchantment, the desire, the trance! The quiet passion of ...

    May 5, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Saving a Tree

    hey guys, thanks so much for reviewing this! im definatley taking all your suggestions into consideration and im working to make this less akward so you can enjoy it. :) ...

    Mar 28, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: .

    thank you all very much for your help, and i think i'll try to switch things around, just to see what happens. and also, thankyou suzanne for that example, it ...

    Mar 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Saving a Tree

    “Katlyn, time to get up.” If it weren’t for the rays of sunlight grazing her cheek, Kate would never have pried her eyes open. Hello Nora, morning John. From their ...

    Mar 25, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Character Drawing

    Honestly, I couldn't critique this if I tried. I'm not saying it isn't flawed, because nothing is perfect, but this picture is just so awe inspiring! Seriously, this sketch has ...

    Mar 19, 2009


Life is like a bag of potatoes, it starts out rough, but can turn into something beautiful (and yummy).
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