KatherineF92

where do i go from here? because let's be serious, i've never had any reason to move my lil tush before. always been pushhhhed along.. juts riding the current that ...

hey there, so what you're saying with this is very interesting; the title itself is enough to make you stop and think. but while you excel in originality you lack ...

hey everyone, thanks for the reviews! especially navita, i appreciate the honesty. and while i don't agree about it being melodramatic or pretentious, i do see where it does sound ...

well i think everyone else pretty much covered it, but i just wanted to say good job! it was easy to read, and not as dull as you thought it ...

As the night lingers on, These four walls get closer and closer.. Suffocating me. You’re absence leaves me wounded and mortified. Trying desperately to cling to any image of happiness ...

thankyou guys for your critiques! they've helped me notice some odd quirks i need to fix

ooohh, i see! thanks for clearing that up!

thankyou ladyworkz! i'm glad you liked it; that was actually my goal, haha. i wrote it basically to describe the emotion of happiness in the hopes of spreading that warm ...

thanks guys! dasiamari: i apologize, because i like to write short and to the point poems sometimes, but if you didnt understand then i didn't write it correctly. i can ...

oh! p.s. i run track and xc too! woo!

hey there! so i thought this poem was really nice, the rhythm was really fluent and it just felt good to read, haha. that sounds weird but when i'm reading ...

Sweeter than the softest melody, More beautiful than the Moon, Warmer than the rising Sun.

thanks so much for your reviews! i agree there are parts to this that could use work, but i'm also going to have to say that the reason you don't ...

like a still-born babe in a mother's arms, my love for you choked before it really begun. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- and edited... like a st

i'm guessing you really like marmalade? haha personally i can't stand the stuff, but if you're willing to write about it, i'm willing to read about it. so at first ...