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Re: I'm Trying
I really enjoyed reading this poem as it is a great reflection of how many teens feel towards their parentals. I could totally relate to the whole thing! The only ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: The Percolated Symphony of Realization
I shivered involuntarily as the lights turned off one by one. Standing outside his apartment in the rain, I knew he would be happy. But that thought didn’t keep tears ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: A glimpse of Paradise
Waves lap lightly at the shore, attempting to reach a land that will never be theirs. Marsh grass rustles in the evening air, calming the starlings into rest for the ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: My carefull, claustral heart
I loved the way you took out one word in the first stanza ("But not daring enough, But not daring, but not...") it really captured the idea of hesitation without ...
Jan 26, 2010
