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Re: Kasidie's Deal.
I fell silent, not exactly sure what to say, or how to say it. I stood there for minutes in silence, just watching. I was learning, being enlightened, in more ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Bed, Pure
Why hello there, i'll be reviewing your poem today. This poem is well written and thought out very well. It took me a time or two to understand it completely. ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: This Sky Will Betray You
I usually don't read such long poetry. This one was quite different fromwhat i've read. I liked the stregnth in this poem. It's point is very strong, along with your ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Line Of Fate
Alrightyyy(: So this was a very well thought poem. Flow was good. But there are a few spots in need of correction: First stanza: "Walking down the line What's gonna ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: My First Novel.
*Hello, Kasidie Clyde here. This is the first chapter to the book I am writing. I am a great story and book writer and wish to get published and be ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: From Dreams To Reality - A love poem
Kasidie Clyde here
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: City Lights Come Crashing Down
This very well written. Good flow, a few grammatical mistakes, a few lines missing words. The normal typo's. Otherwise. This is a bittersweet poem. Nice to read, well written, seems ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Hands
This may be just my opinion, some may share it with me, but a lot of this didn't flow for me. Maybe i read it wrong. Or maybe you wrote ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: ---
First thing about this. Be a little more..... Literate. Thank you for your time, Darling, have a nice day.
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: What Thou Art Sees in Me
In using Olde English, you must know how to. Or your poem will seem ignorant. This poem is sweet, and to the point, yet so not original. You need to ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Burden
This poem is bittersweet. Very straight forward, slightly confusing, but easily fixed. I enjoyed it. Flowed very well, good grammar and vocabulary. I liked it, keep up the good work
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: If I Were a Bumblebee
Short. Simple. Sweet. And fun(: Very playful. Keep it up.
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: "Keys in Broken Locks"
Hello, I'm Kasidie Clyde. The depth and truth in this poem, has touched me with sincerity, you are very talented. I can't wait to read more of your writing. -Kasidie
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Dying Love
As my love for you dies, Slowly and in vain, There it fades. The thoughts of you, Are negative but true. Your love for me, will NEVER be.
Jan 7, 2011
