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KasidieClyde

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Kasidie's Deal.

    I fell silent, not exactly sure what to say, or how to say it. I stood there for minutes in silence, just watching. I was learning, being enlightened, in more ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Bed, Pure

    Why hello there, i'll be reviewing your poem today. This poem is well written and thought out very well. It took me a time or two to understand it completely. ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: This Sky Will Betray You

    I usually don't read such long poetry. This one was quite different fromwhat i've read. I liked the stregnth in this poem. It's point is very strong, along with your ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Line Of Fate

    Alrightyyy(: So this was a very well thought poem. Flow was good. But there are a few spots in need of correction: First stanza: "Walking down the line What's gonna ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: My First Novel.

    *Hello, Kasidie Clyde here. This is the first chapter to the book I am writing. I am a great story and book writer and wish to get published and be ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: From Dreams To Reality - A love poem

    Kasidie Clyde here

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: City Lights Come Crashing Down

    This very well written. Good flow, a few grammatical mistakes, a few lines missing words. The normal typo's. Otherwise. This is a bittersweet poem. Nice to read, well written, seems ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hands

    This may be just my opinion, some may share it with me, but a lot of this didn't flow for me. Maybe i read it wrong. Or maybe you wrote ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: ---

    First thing about this. Be a little more..... Literate. Thank you for your time, Darling, have a nice day.

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: What Thou Art Sees in Me

    In using Olde English, you must know how to. Or your poem will seem ignorant. This poem is sweet, and to the point, yet so not original. You need to ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Burden

    This poem is bittersweet. Very straight forward, slightly confusing, but easily fixed. I enjoyed it. Flowed very well, good grammar and vocabulary. I liked it, keep up the good work

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: If I Were a Bumblebee

    Short. Simple. Sweet. And fun(: Very playful. Keep it up.

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: "Keys in Broken Locks"

    Hello, I'm Kasidie Clyde. The depth and truth in this poem, has touched me with sincerity, you are very talented. I can't wait to read more of your writing. -Kasidie

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dying Love

    As my love for you dies, Slowly and in vain, There it fades. The thoughts of you, Are negative but true. Your love for me, will NEVER be.

    Jan 7, 2011


A wizard is never late. Nor is he early; he arrives precisely when he means to.
— Gandalf