Karzkin

My first attempt at a sonnet. Please tell me what you think. I’ve been to cities that never close down, Sydney, New York, Paris, London, and Rome. I have seen ...

Hahaha not at all sarebear. This is definitely not a dig at anyone in particular. This is just supposed to be informative, and humourous at the same time :P You ...

Why do you waste your time here? Get published already!

Hello! I'm here today to try to inform you all of what a haiku is , and what a haiku isn't . I will also briefly explain another form of ...

This is a nice little pair of senryu. However, they are not haiku. You might like to have a look at this : It is a crash course in writing ...

一 Haiku are harder Than a lot of people think. Please do some research. 二 These are all senryu, Definitely not haiku. Please learn the diff'rence. 三 Haiku need kigo ...

Could everyone please, please learn the difference between a haiku and a senryu. This is not a haiku as it contains no kigo (seasonal or nature reference), no keriji (a ...

Contrary to what Ignatius said, the rhyme scheme was hardly poor. But he is right, it could be improved. The first stanza is good, nothing to say here. The second ...

Title has been changed. Thanks for the suggestions.

Hello again Alzora. I consider haikus a bit of a speciallity of mine, so if you don't mind, I'll take a look at yours. This is almost an excellent example ...

I disagree with bsbfan. I think this is a very clever piece, especially because it is so short. I especially like the line "an echo of silence". This is a ...

I'm sorry to say, but I did not like this at all. It's a nice idea, but the execution was all over the place. I'll take it line by line. ...

Reserving a spot! Review on its way.

Hello there. This is excellent. Great concept, and well explored. However, a number of critiques (of course). First, a few small qualms relating to your use of punctuation: Waiting for ...

Cocky and vain, haughty and proud. Playing the fool, and playing the crowd. This is a side of me you often see, But I’m not as bad as you make ...